Teacher Comments
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Irvin Penn
Aneta Ivanova
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Erkin Demir
Yaser Almajed
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Peer Assessment
I gave you 68/80.
AO1 - You have developed your work a lot. Your introduction to order and disorder is very good, with the mind map and pictures from Morocco and New York, There is a clear mind map and each response is fluent and informative. 3D effect and gifs are your best responses. You have not developed your three strands (although I know that you will), so the work is incomplete.
AO2 - Your photos are refined and effective, and up to the three strands you analysed artists in full detail.
AO3 - You showed clearly how you produced your portrait disorder pictures. Your portrait disorder strand is your strongest strand. However, in the three strands there is no artist analysis.
AO4 - Although you have not done the final piece, your three strands are very effective and the images are edited well. You just need to choose what to do for your final piece.
AO1 - You have developed your work a lot. Your introduction to order and disorder is very good, with the mind map and pictures from Morocco and New York, There is a clear mind map and each response is fluent and informative. 3D effect and gifs are your best responses. You have not developed your three strands (although I know that you will), so the work is incomplete.
AO2 - Your photos are refined and effective, and up to the three strands you analysed artists in full detail.
AO3 - You showed clearly how you produced your portrait disorder pictures. Your portrait disorder strand is your strongest strand. However, in the three strands there is no artist analysis.
AO4 - Although you have not done the final piece, your three strands are very effective and the images are edited well. You just need to choose what to do for your final piece.
Pupil response:
- Created mindmap online
- Change portrait disorder
- Added artist and me comparison
- Created mindmap online
- Change portrait disorder
- Added artist and me comparison
20.3.14
Peer Assessment - Josie Greenwood
You have chosen appropriate places to photograph and most images are well exposed. In my opinion you have met your brief because your images show the contrast between old and new London. You responded to your location by using angles that represent a clear understanding of the topic. The layers used in the photographs show a strong grasp of the formal elements and make the photographs aesthetically pleasing. Lydia was inspired by an unprofessional photographer called Gareth.
Peer Assessment - Josie Greenwood
You have chosen appropriate places to photograph and most images are well exposed. In my opinion you have met your brief because your images show the contrast between old and new London. You responded to your location by using angles that represent a clear understanding of the topic. The layers used in the photographs show a strong grasp of the formal elements and make the photographs aesthetically pleasing. Lydia was inspired by an unprofessional photographer called Gareth.